None Of These Walls Poem by Ernest Makuakua

None Of These Walls

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These walls can't speak
These walls though so hard yet not strong
These walls not as colorful as what i have in mind
I said none of these walls
These dead walls can ever change what i have obtained from above

These walls so moving so soundly weird these walls still standing yet I'm moving
These walls so common so hating, I'm battling, With the motive of Overcoming, We will survive Just remember
I said none of these walls will ever change a thing till you realize the wall blinding you

These walls so strong as you see them
No realize in these walls no bricks are built on it even if there were id still pass through
Therefore so none of these drawn walls, these built walls, these made walls, this world walls these heart walls and these human walls can change what I Feel For you
What we have for one another

I am waiting for you

None of these walls my Love can ever penetrate
No see through, no breakthrough what we have these boundaries they have set before us cannot deter us from seeing one another and i hope we still be together attached, strapped and tangled
Together that is where i seem to land at the end

Yet with my shield I'd still be free as born free i was so ill break free from these Walls
So none of these walls my love none of these walls my love could ever Separate us.

None Of These Walls
Tuesday, February 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: relationships,together
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes in life we are seperated by unseen walls in our lives. these walls are the ones we sometimes create and some are caused by those we live with and communicate with and some by people in general. Theres this thing called pride it destroys that you will not do this till someone else does it but question is who gets hurt along the way knowing the truth.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 18 October 2020

These walls so common so hating, I'm battling, With the motive of Overcoming, We will survive Just remember- - -well said

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Anne Yun 09 March 2017

Let go of that pride, let it fall like rain from your eyes, so that the walls will become a bride's veil gently cover your beauty. Best wishes.

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Ernest Makuakua 10 March 2017

Thanks my friend

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