Noon Witness Poem by Catrina Heart

Noon Witness

Rating: 5.0


broken windows, crushed pate
abandoned tresses staling
on sullied deck of rose...

O what pain it bears on the lofty peaks of coldness?
What torment it feels in its reverberating loneliness?
fluxing icicle cries... cries to shun the rust on each petal

deafening silence mingle, as high noon witness
the mounting of summer dust...swathing doors
veins coil on cold leaves of your two-faced hatch

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 18 December 2009

intrigues me catrina a great poem 10

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 31 January 2010

fantastic images.. love to read.. ur poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 December 2009

O what pain it bears on the lofty peaks of coldness? What torment it feels in its reverberating loneliness? fluxing icicle cries... cries to shun the rust on each petal.it is an previlage to witness such great poem from renowned poetess from philipinnes..land of love and warmth...tks for sharing it..10

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Prashant Shaurya 19 December 2009

a beautiful small poem madam.. and so are the expressions.. liked the choice of words.. 10+++ certainly.. i cordially invite you to read my new poem, 'the test of the chief'.. and do bless with your comments and votes for it.. regards prashant

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Eyan Desir 18 December 2009

At last you posted a new poem........ your piece is poetic and well express Good job C.T... A poem this good could never have been written by a 11 year old kid...lol Keep up the good work.... For sure we are happy to have you on p.h I personal hope you keep posting your poems here... I know p.h have a world of problems.... But some ppl here are like family... many thanks........ Keep making poems Keep on being nice Thank you...

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Ramesh T A 18 December 2009

Tragic note moves heart to see better time in life soon!

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