Catrina Heart


Noon Witness - Poem by Catrina Heart

broken windows, crushed pate
abandoned tresses staling
on sullied deck of rose...

O what pain it bears on the lofty peaks of coldness?
What torment it feels in its reverberating loneliness?
fluxing icicle cries... cries to shun the rust on each petal

deafening silence mingle, as high noon witness
the mounting of summer dust...swathing doors
veins coil on cold leaves of your two-faced hatch


Comments about Noon Witness by Catrina Heart

  • Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee (1/31/2010 8:20:00 AM)


    fantastic images.. love to read.. ur poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/28/2009 10:53:00 PM)


    O what pain it bears on the lofty peaks of coldness?
    What torment it feels in its reverberating loneliness?
    fluxing icicle cries... cries to shun the rust on each petal.it is an previlage to witness such great poem from renowned poetess from philipinnes..land of love and warmth...tks for sharing it..10
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  • Prashant Shaurya (12/19/2009 8:46:00 AM)


    a beautiful small poem madam..
    and so are the expressions..
    liked the choice of words..
    10+++ certainly..

    i cordially invite you to read my new poem, 'the test of the chief'..
    and do bless with your comments and votes for it..

    regards
    prashant
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  • (12/18/2009 9:24:00 PM)


    At last you posted a new poem........
    your piece is poetic and well express
    Good job C.T...
    A poem this good could never have been written
    by a 11 year old kid...lol

    Keep up the good work....

    For sure we are happy to have you on p.h
    I personal hope you keep posting your poems here...
    I know p.h have a world of problems....

    But some ppl here are like family...
    many thanks........
    Keep making poems
    Keep on being nice
    Thank you...
    (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A (12/18/2009 3:19:00 PM)


    Tragic note moves heart to see better time in life soon! (Report) Reply

  • (12/18/2009 2:18:00 PM)


    intrigues me catrina a great poem 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, August 1, 2011


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