Of Bees And Roses Poem by Catrina Heart

Of Bees And Roses

Rating: 5.0


measure in an accurate radius
the half forgotten pools
spin to get circumference
the swirls and ebb of whispering cool

calculate the unmasked area
where love and friendship sit on its throne
you may glide and sail in parallel
swim and dive in symmetrical pattern

on the circle of love of bees and roses
no point of end, no starting points
just streaming on ring in cycles
we just have to water and tend


6th of December,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kranthi Pothineni 06 December 2009

Completely an interesting piece. Certain lines and title s this write are really catchy. Ending line is executed well.

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Daniel Kempson 06 December 2009

A very warming piece Catrina done in style and much thought 10 Daniel

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Carol Gall 06 December 2009

a poem to warm one 10

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Kesav Easwaran 12 December 2009

water the rose but don't try to 'water' the bee...he loves only honey...rose honey...of his own rose! a rose gets inspired goes poetic...

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 07 December 2009

the keenest observation is the reflection of the poem.10

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Catrina Heart 07 December 2009

Oh Eyan i forgot to put a footnote below the poem it was inspired by one of your poem...Thanks for the inspiration you gave me....thanks for the support and all....God Bless! ! !

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Eyan Desir 06 December 2009

hahaha I understood this one perfectly! ! A bee and a rose... very nice together in one circle I wonder where the inspiration came from hmmmm... Your poems keep getting better and better Keep shining like the sun C.T

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Fay Slimm 06 December 2009

Good comparisons shown in this fine verse Catrina - - the circle of love ever turns -10/10 Fay -

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