Catrina Heart

Of Bees And Roses - Poem by Catrina Heart

measure in an accurate radius
the half forgotten pools
spin to get circumference
the swirls and ebb of whispering cool

calculate the unmasked area
where love and friendship sit on its throne
you may glide and sail in parallel
swim and dive in symmetrical pattern

on the circle of love of bees and roses
no point of end, no starting points
just streaming on ring in cycles
we just have to water and tend

6th of December,2009

Comments about Of Bees And Roses by Catrina Heart

  • (12/12/2009 12:09:00 AM)

    water the rose but don't try to 'water' the bee...he loves only honey...rose honey...of his own rose!
    a rose gets inspired goes poetic...
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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/7/2009 9:51:00 PM)

    the keenest observation is the reflection of the poem.10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/7/2009 12:18:00 AM)

    Oh Eyan i forgot to put a footnote below the poem it was inspired by one of your poem...Thanks for the inspiration you gave me....thanks for the support and all....God Bless! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2009 4:07:00 PM)

    hahaha I understood this one perfectly! !
    A bee and a rose... very nice
    together in one circle
    I wonder where the inspiration came from hmmmm...
    Your poems keep getting better and better
    Keep shining like the sun C.T
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  • Fay Slimm (12/6/2009 8:22:00 AM)

    Good comparisons shown in this fine verse Catrina - - the circle of love ever turns -10/10 Fay - (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2009 7:42:00 AM)

    a poem to warm one 10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2009 6:35:00 AM)

    A very warming piece Catrina done in style and much thought 10 Daniel (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2009 6:32:00 AM)

    Completely an interesting piece. Certain lines and title s this write are really catchy. Ending line is executed well. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 6, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 17, 2009

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