Some fragments of her heart
That was shattered long ago
Swam to the winter burrow
With broken angelic wings
Some sailed a forlorn vessel
Of desires, of wants and needs
A complex obsession that lies
Thumping on adobe of fantasy
Some swirled mutely on brooks
Of veracity’s enchanting tale
Bitter sweet on daylight’s arm
Yet warm on silver moon’s charm
Choice of diction, imagery and the feelings behind, all are superb. A heart touching poem.
Wonderfully written poem.. The imagery and the words are beautiful.. Thanks.
Thoughts done in ways that subtly presents the dreams the cares and anxieties that every heart carries within.....Winnie
Expressive outpouring of feeling! I especially liked this: 'Some swirled mutely on brooks Of veracity’s enchanting tale' Pretty wording. Enjoyable read!
very nice literary piece. Ma'am Catrina, you write very good!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This reads like a mesmerizing magical spell. (smile)