The Enemy Within Poem by Catrina Heart
The Enemy Within
‘Have taken green, bizarre extra leap –
Which birth from the extreme edge of limits?
Sans ruminating – where and how to perch
With the thrills and bliss; a satchel of love
She leapfrogs from the high rise – a sky scraper’s dive
Jeopardizing domain, gambling all – on love’s name
Yes there are sins eating our flesh in the name of love so sweet these little sins Sweeter than sugar the enemies within.... continue the collection I love this.....
Misuse of love makes matters worse than better, a matter all have to think about!
She leapfrogs from the high rise – a sky scraper’s dive Jeopardizing domain, gambling all – on love’s name...love is gamble and one has to take it bearing full consequences in mind.. it should also beborne in mind that it demands sacrifice and dediction and for sure nothing in return.... well devoted to love in purest form..i admire it and love its contents....10
wait...might my wrds will not fit the theme, but this is what i want to write my dearest...some are making love as gambling..it means there are money matters involve, , and these kinds of people are more that dangerous, notorious or criminals..they can make these people dance by their influence..choose the right to be a partner...if i were to be asked? hmmmm, the kindest the better and simple is the best....simple people are not greedy, they are contented by their simple choices and wishes..unknown to others, simple people are easy to deal with...your piece is nice and intersting to read..cheers
A new angle to view love but the panorama is not so pleasing. Better look inwardly. You have come up with a good poem comprising new idea, Catrina. Good Wishes Naseer
The Enemy Within..so simple t but there is also a confusion within. It is a struggle..to be or not to be..We have to be careful what to do, what to decide...As you said here, ' leap frogs form the high rise' And when we are down, we must be sure to have somebody to lif us up. Very nice piece.I love this..as I always love all your works.
very nice shaping the love picture i like it and it's really true
She leapfrogs from the high rise – a sky scraper’s dive Jeopardizing domain, gambling all – on love’s name marvelous..and heart clicking idea and words...pictographic effects and meaningful thought and I agree with you and say...yes she believes in love..the one who stay inside you.. enjoyed it very much..liked it 10/10
A picture perfect picture of the highs and lows of love-at any age.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/12/2025 8:36:47 PM # 1.0.0
Love takes you to life's skyscrapers but at times make you dive down desperate...short sweet poignant write...thanks...10