The Enemy Within Poem by Catrina Heart

The Enemy Within

Rating: 2.8


‘Have taken green, bizarre extra leap –
Which birth from the extreme edge of limits?

Sans ruminating – where and how to perch
With the thrills and bliss; a satchel of love

She leapfrogs from the high rise – a sky scraper’s dive
Jeopardizing domain, gambling all – on love’s name

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Almedia Knight-Oliver 18 October 2009

A picture perfect picture of the highs and lows of love-at any age.

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Ken E Hall 18 October 2009

You portait the power of love that can elate or destroy in adequate few lines very loud indeed...a big teenager problem too as the baird explained+++++++10 uavanice1 regards

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 15 October 2009

read and understood your undoubted skills. shan

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Noel Horlanda 15 October 2009

The enemy within which I believe is yourself. If there is a failure in one's love life, it's only you to be blamed, nobody else. So next time learn by your mistakes. Choose carefully and intelligently.That's my advice young ladies and that goes to male population too.Great write Cathy...three cheers.

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Anand Madhukar 14 October 2009

Love can indeed be antithetical to reason. A fine write.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 October 2009

A new angle to view love but the panorama is not so pleasing. Better look inwardly. You have come up with a good poem comprising new idea, Catrina. Good Wishes Naseer

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Meggie Gultiano 25 October 2009

The Enemy Within..so simple t but there is also a confusion within. It is a struggle..to be or not to be..We have to be careful what to do, what to decide...As you said here, ' leap frogs form the high rise' And when we are down, we must be sure to have somebody to lif us up. Very nice piece.I love this..as I always love all your works.

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Mohammed Hassan 22 October 2009

very nice shaping the love picture i like it and it's really true

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Afzal Shauq 21 October 2009

She leapfrogs from the high rise – a sky scraper’s dive Jeopardizing domain, gambling all – on love’s name marvelous..and heart clicking idea and words...pictographic effects and meaningful thought and I agree with you and say...yes she believes in love..the one who stay inside you.. enjoyed it very much..liked it 10/10

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 18 October 2009

A picture perfect picture of the highs and lows of love-at any age.

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