Tsira Gogeshvili

Rookie - 15 Points (29.07.1959. / Tbilisi)

Nostalgia - Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

These hands
Are just the illusion
Of the wings…

I can’t fly
Anywhere…
Now, it's no doubt.

My blazing kingdom
Has melted
In the sky.


He Has nailed me,
To the ground
With nostalgia...


Comments about Nostalgia by Tsira Gogeshvili

  • Romeo Della Valle (5/1/2011 12:31:00 PM)

    An excellent and well crafted write! A well deserved 10+++ Thanks for inspiring me and the whole world! Thanks also for sharing, Love and Peace for always1... (Report)Reply

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  • Bert Bell (10/23/2010 1:32:00 AM)

    What a marvelous poem you have written here, Tsira. Very lovely indeed.10+ (Report)Reply

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  • (10/18/2010 4:20:00 PM)

    Lol! You write beautifully Tsira! And I see you fly like a butterfly to a certain extent! (Report)Reply

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  • Raju Baruah (4/24/2010 10:06:00 AM)

    These hands
    Are just the illusion
    Of the wings…

    Magnificent writing...Your words embrace your feelings so profoundly...10+++
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  • (2/13/2010 1:13:00 PM)

    wow, tsira, you play magic with the words....the last line is mesmerizing. (Report)Reply

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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (12/18/2009 10:16:00 AM)

    Nostalgia is such a sad and beautiful thing that it nails everyone to the ground. You are a gifted poetess, Tsira...10/10.

    Naseer
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  • (12/1/2009 5:00:00 AM)

    A beautifully written poem Tsira, one of your best I think,
    10 from me
    Lynda xx
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  • (11/7/2009 3:37:00 PM)

    'He Has nailed me to the ground'

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • Ramin Chaman (10/16/2009 7:42:00 AM)

    Hi Tsira..

    About your poem... succinct. and readable..and a little heartsick.....10+
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  • (8/22/2009 8:26:00 AM)

    Tsira: Powerful, haunting, and lyrical. Very well done. Thank you for sharing this.

    -G
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  • (8/13/2009 2:09:00 AM)

    Nostalgia should make one soar too...Experienced that before? ?
    Cheers.
    Subroto
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  • (7/24/2009 2:32:00 PM)

    intriguing poem, very well written. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/25/2009 6:19:00 AM)

    THW LAST THREE LINES FINISHED THE POEM VERY WELL......10 (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav Easwaran (6/2/2009 3:58:00 AM)

    you beautifully weave in the idea inside your mind...yes; illusions are our only wings...thanks Tsira...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (5/27/2009 2:40:00 AM)

    'He Has nailed me,
    To the ground
    With nostalgia...'

    O the excellent lines if I could write!
    So lucid and so deep! ! 10+++
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  • (5/3/2009 10:42:00 AM)

    but surely you can still fly... even with nail-scarred wings.... (Report)Reply

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  • (4/29/2009 9:12:00 PM)

    Extraordinary imagery. You are in good poetic voice in this one.
    It is one of your very best, Tsira. Ten many times over.

    Love,

    Sandra
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  • (4/27/2009 7:00:00 PM)

    Glad to see you up there- in the air, lifted by the void.....beautyfull words (Report)Reply

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  • (4/26/2009 11:45:00 AM)

    still you have the mind to fly (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav Easwaran (4/26/2009 12:32:00 AM)

    yes; how would we leave this ground? excellent write... artful...10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 1, 2011


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