'Not Just Yet' Poem by Bernard Snyder

'Not Just Yet'



'Not Just Yet'
Sometimes I feel I'm running on empty
my heart has given all it can give,
it has been abused so many times before
at times I wonder how it still lives,
part of me would like to try love again
because there's so much I really miss,
but as soon as I feel I'm ready to commit
I realize my fears outweigh the risks,
so then I creep back into my little shell
and put my heart safely in it's cage,
I know I'll eventually give in one day
but right now I'm just too afraid!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rekha Mandagere 24 April 2012

Friend, it is high time and must come out of all fears and identify the need of your heart. Of course, risks are always involved but I wish your path o love must be full of roses without thorns! Nice sentiments are poetically said! Must give you 10 now and later 10++++ hahaha

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Unwritten Soul 23 April 2012

When your mind speaks to heart you will able to write a poem like this, because without the interaction of two transparently observed here, which is great for us. I love the honest feeling and i appreciate how it coming in poetry. Bernard keep writing you are welcomed in poetry for us_Unwritten Soul

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