Tuesday, August 9, 2005

Nude Beach Rookie Comments

Rating: 4.4

a nude beach
looks like fun
yet my pale moon
should never see the sun
...
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Chuck Audette
COMMENTS
Barry Van Allen 28 April 2007

Chuck, With your averted eyes, I guess you didn't realize, that most will put the sunscreen, where it is needed most ! B.V.A.

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alice sunderland 19 January 2007

howd i miss this one! its a cracker. nice one chuck. al.

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Poetry Hound 07 July 2006

Ah ha ha! This poem puts a little sunshine in my life.

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Scarlett Treat 11 May 2006

HA! No longer a pale moon rising but a setting sun...I see the rosy glow from here!

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Joy Vanderhelm 08 January 2006

Brilliant! You've done it again, gone and made me smile.

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Poetry Hound 09 August 2005

Very funny and clever.

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Sallie Howson 09 August 2005

so funny, this is brilliant

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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