Sathya Narayana
Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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Nuggets (Acrostic)

Rating: 5.0
Nuggets of gold, money and authority
Ultimate luxury, status and handy men
Gathered he through all bloody means
Giving not a damn to humane feelings
Equipoise is but nature’s patent strategy
Tamed is he by crippling ailments
So sad! Spends life like a frozen vegetable!
Jayaprakash Panicker 02 November 2008
our commercial ads look like female generation takes a necklace in the morning for breakfast, a gold chairn with earrings and few bangles for lunch and a couple of anklets wastelets for supper. and their male couterparts to any length to look ugly by daubing themselves witl all MNC filth on them. they way they use to get these is quite opposite to the way of real natural world. what is natural is right. when will we understand this? a small and telling write a like it. jaypee
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Alison Cassidy 02 November 2008
Irony penned with skill and anger in this fine poem about the obscenity of power and wealth. Your final line, 'Spends life like a frozen vegetable! ' is superb! love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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Nuggets: they would be not bad at all, if hold their natural substance. Here the bad is that many things are adulterated and occupy the place of the natural elements. Unluckily some people think they can't do without them.
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Stacey Watts 28 October 2008
Very true poem states a truth of greed. Great job!
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Lynda Robson 28 October 2008
Health is the most important thing in this life, wealth is no good to an ill man, good topic, 10 Lynda xx
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Seema Aarella 27 October 2008
Luxury, material pleasures and wealth have their own draw backs...which u have stated well.
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Seema Chowdhury 25 October 2008
very nice thoughts composed here. true in this selfish world no one thinks about others. we are all very busy with our wealth, authority and luxury. well written piece.
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Sumita Datta 24 October 2008
Spends life like a frozen vegetable! - What is terrific ending.... again a good write...
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Dr Kamran Haider 24 October 2008
Wow sathya... An insightful piece exposing the narrow vision of human race... Beautifully and Truthfully written by a pure soul... I loved it...
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Sandra Fowler 24 October 2008
And all the while he was writing his own epitaph... What a terrible pity. Very powerfully written. This one resonates. Kind regards, Sandra
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