O ye tree sans shade,
Under thee no one rested,
Thine fruits no'ne tasted.
O path of love so lonely,
No one looked at thee,
Lost love seems thine fate.
O island of peace,
No one sought thy bliss,
And no one seems it to miss.
O birds of heaven,
Thou art the sole one
That come, nestle and return.
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Musings |37.03.2020|
Topic: tree, love, peace, birds
A magnificent piece of work sir! Appreciated and admired...10+++
Path of love is so lonely but this love motivates life for higher realm. Due to love for each other and love for nest birds return home. Re-visiting this excellent poem I am very much glad.
To all the poets who visited and gave such beautiful feedback. Due Internet problems sorry id I can't individually acknowledge.
O island of peace, No one sought thy bliss, And no one seems it to miss..... outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
In this time of uncertainty, sometimes it is better to dwell in the island of peace. Wonderful triolet. Brilliantly penned.
sweet birdie poetry was waiting to see par aap ayein kyun naheen good bird catching POETRY
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A well penned composition. Simply wonderful......10++++