Oblivious Obligation Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Oblivious Obligation

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We are the students and Nature is the teacher,
To oblige her and respect her is our feature.
We have to obey superiors with law and order,
As human beings, we are to obey the leader.

There are some rules those are oblivious to us,
We must catch those in mind and never to loss.
It is a rule of the nature to sleep in the night,
Though it is known to us we don't obey it tight.

Children have obligation to serve their parents,
But some of them neglect we see in current.
It is the rule to keep the environment clean,
But we pollute air, water, atmosphere in din.

We have obligation to creatures and nature,
We must oblige superiors, young to nurture.
Love and affection interlink the people in mass,
Every person has to obligate before lives pass.

In the field of work in shop, factory or office,
Every person has to obligate and to remove vice.
Keep away from anger, anxiety let's love to all,
God is ocean of peace, let's pray him and call.

Monday, November 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poet in this poem describes about our duties or obligation towards the superiors. He says that all human beings are the students whereas nature is the teacher. We have to obey the superiors, leaders along with the law and order. There are some rules for us which are oblivious. We should keep all these rules in our mind and obey these. It is the rule of the nature to sleep at night. If we violet it we may suffer from disease. Sons and daughters have obligation to their parents. But we feel that they are neglecting to serve their parents in time. It is also rule to keep the air, water and atmosphere clean, but we are going on polluting. We have to obligate the nature and creatures all. Love and affection interlink the whole people. Till life we must obligate to our respected superiors in shop, factory and office etc. Every person has to obligate and remove vices. We should keep ourselves away from anger, anxiety, ego etc. and pray to God, the ocean of peace. This is the theme of this poem in thumb's nail. It is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India on this the day of 17th November,2014 and is dedicated to the people of the world.
Glossary
Obligation - constraining power of law/indebtedness for service
Oblivious - unaware or unconscious
Din - loud and annoying noise
Current - belonging to the present time.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walkerjohn 17 November 2014

Aloha Kumarmani.. Thank you for your post this day... It is a simple reminder that humans are the root cause of all the fuss... this base truth, from one line of your work... tells the tale... [we pollute air, water, atmosphere] nothing else of organic nature has the impact of an overwhelming human population that chooses not to look past the ends of their noses nor think about this earth as their only mother... Where else are US fools all going to live? The bulk of your post is a little misleading... perhaps intentionally so... just to get the goat of an old observer such as I... I will to take your words and what I feel is your intent, and get them the old Michaelw1two twist! I will contact you with my work before I consider posting it... I am sure you will be pleased... until that moment... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

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Efran Menny 05 October 2020

So sweet rhyming flows like sweet stream. Your poem is absolutely very beautiful. Love and affection link people of course.

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 October 2018

its true statement - We are the students and Nature is the teacher //// greatly penned the poem is

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 March 2016

Let's pray! ! Nice piece of work.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2015

In the field of work in shop, factory or office, Every person has to obligate and to remove vice.... nice one...10 everywhere it is same no need o blame i is our duty o preserve he natural beauty

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Ramesh Rai 12 July 2015

God is the ocean of peace. Beautiful write reminding our oblivious nature. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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