Observations Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Observations

Rating: 4.3


Observations

soft as the dewdrops fall
upon the moss green valley

we can not see them all
but despite they are falling softly
you can hear their tickling voices
upon the soft green tapestry,
you can hear their sighs so secretly

my loved one amuses
concentrating upon the tickling voices
such loveliest noises, he amuses...

© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Another Day On Its Way Wednesday 25 August 2021

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
So happy to watch him, amused by the simple tickling rains. Poems need never be so very difficult
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 26 August 2021

It is worth listening to pit pat of rain and falling dew drops rather than any news channels, Awesome poem.5****

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 August 2021

So happy to watch him, amused by the simple tickling rains. Poems ought never to be so very difficult. A voice whispering inside

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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