Ocean Poem by Michelle Claus

Ocean

Rating: 4.5


Ocean
lashing the rocks
sculpting my savage coast
where vagrant seagulls loiter and perch …
Earth submits to you as a grain of sand,
and to your motion I cast
the cadence of my thoughts.

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Saturday, June 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: ocean
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 14 June 2014

very fine, I like it, thanks.

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Chuy Amante 14 June 2014

Indeed! While with the sea we learn to let her weave us

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Sandra Feldman 14 June 2014

Magnifique! You have captured the essence of the ocean with great imagery but above all this magnificent poem conveys the feeling, grandeur and mystery that the sea provokes. Now, thanks to you I can see and feel the sea again.and join the vagrant seagulls there. A true pearl of a poem, to be cherished

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Captain Cur 19 June 2014

Passion and senuality sculpt this savage piece.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 September 2015

a very nice potrayal of the ocean and the rocks and seagulls, water lashing the rocks. a great job. thank you

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Michelle Claus 25 September 2015

Thank you for your kind comment

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Clarence Prince 25 January 2015

A lovely job! Well done Michelle!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 26 August 2014

You presented vast ocean on your palm so lucidly, I am mystified. Great!

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 05 August 2014

thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing

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Kirti Sharma 25 June 2014

beautiful poem... i like it!

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