Ocean Forever Deep* Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Ocean Forever Deep*

Rating: 5.0


Calm cool waves my soul to sea
softy how they cling to me.
Afterthoughts gradually drifiting
down the bottom swell the top.
Lauaghter floats back to me.
The fairest Σ ε ι ρ ή ν sings.
Magic hair flowing free lighting
candles in the breeze and with
her beneeth the waves I sleep..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Moore 10 April 2009

i agree, wonderful imagery. this poems speaks to me as not many do. great job.

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Mimi Fakhira 29 January 2009

I love this one! You made it sound so simple and cool.... you're like a huge wave crashing the shore! Nice descriptions and imagery. Keep it up :)

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James McLain

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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