Octopus Garden (Aft. The Beatles) Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Octopus Garden (Aft. The Beatles)

Rating: 5.0

Let me in yr garden
Mr. Octopus why won't you?
I thought we were friends
Wanting to play with you
And help clean what we humans have done
I want you to play in a safe ocean
And take yr wife out to a romantic dinner
While you and her get reacquainted
Playiing with yr kids
Without the pollutants to worry about
Let me in yr garden
I will clean up I promise

Saturday, October 14, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: environment,kids,ocean,romantic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 14 October 2023

A wonderfully creative tribute to The Beatles, the environment and the oceans. Love it, LeeAnn! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 04 December 2023

This is absolutely precious work..... thank u, LeeAnn.....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 October 2023

A beautiful poem with a meaningful message. A great promise for a safe environment, LeeAnn.One small act can make a difference.

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Sandra Feldman 14 October 2023

Too late now. I don't believe you, human! But the poem's great and all should read, maybe something still can be saved!

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Kevin Patrick 14 October 2023

this is a really cool take on a Beatles song, reimagining it as an environmental message is unique and fits our time. I think Ringo and the boys would approve!

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Kevin Patrick 14 October 2023

this is a really cool retake on ab

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