Ode To Bird Watching Poem by Pablo Neruda

Ode To Bird Watching

Rating: 3.1


Now
Let's look for birds!
The tall iron branches
in the forest,
The dense
fertility on the ground.
The world
is wet.
A dewdrop or raindrop
shines,
a diminutive star
among the leaves.
The morning time
mother earth
is cool.
The air
is like a river
which shakes
the silence.
It smells of rosemary,
of space
and roots.
Overhead,
a crazy song.
It's a bird.
How
out of its throat
smaller than a finger
can there fall the waters
of its song?
Luminous ease!
Invisible
power
torrent
of music
in the leaves.
Sacred conversations!
Clean and fresh washed
is this
day resounding
like a green dulcimer.
I bury
my shoes
in the mud,
jump over rivulets.
A thorn
bites me and a gust
of air like a crystal
wave
splits up inside my chest.
Where
are the birds?
Maybe it was
that
rustling in the foliage
or that fleeting pellet
of brown velvet
or that displaced
perfume? That
leaf that let loose cinnamon smell
- was that a bird? That dust
from an irritated magnolia
or that fruit
which fell with a thump -
was that a flight?
Oh, invisible little
critters
birds of the devil
with their ringing
with their useless feathers.
I only want
to caress them,
to see them resplendent.
I don't want
to see under glass
the embalmed lightning.
I want to see them living.
I want to touch their gloves
of real hide,
which they never forget in
the branches
and to converse with
them
sitting on my shoulders
although they may leave
me like certain statues
undeservedly whitewashed.
Impossible.
You can't touch them.
You can hear them
like a heavenly
rustle or movement.
They converse
with precision.
They repeat
their observations.
They brag
of how much they do.
They comment
on everything that exists.
They learn
certain sciences
like hydrography.
and by a sure science
they know
where there are harvests
of grain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 27 April 2014

Awesome I like this poem, check mine out 

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Anthony Henriques 14 July 2016

disappointing stuff from a great poet

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Captain Herbert Poetry 12 June 2015

Superb. Wonderful poem and beautiful thoughts

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 July 2016

Birds and nature! ! Life and beauty. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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B.m. Biswas 14 July 2016

beautiful...it seems to me that i am in a forest......i am indulged in deep spititual thinking'''''' wordsworths pantheistic view you remind us.....

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Cristobal benjumea 15 December 2019

Great ode to song. TALES OF SONGS. From its beginning until it like a bird it is released in mirth

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Indira Renganathan 12 November 2016

Pablo Neruda's poems are all poetic though in free verses....this one is too, too poetic- 10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 14 July 2016

Fantastic flight of imagery is reflected through out the narration of bird watching experience in this great poem. Thanks for sharing it here.

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Susan Williams 14 July 2016

I think he covered the topic of bird watching and listening to bird song totally and completely! What else is there to be said? I fell in love with this in particular: How out of its throat smaller than a finger can there fall the waters of its song? Luminous ease! Invisible power torrent of music in the leaves. Sacred conversations! Clean and fresh washed is this day resounding like a green dulcimer. Oh, to write like him! ! Except this is his voice and it cannot be imitated only admired.

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Bird watching people still fervently do But not in forest or trees as you once did Now it goes on in beaches without a clue As the “birds”, run and frolic across the blue….. I invite readers to my page too for your valuable comments on my poetic attempts.....

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