Of Life, The Flow Poem by Sandra Feldman
Of Life, The Flow
Drowning in the deep hollow chambers
Of pitiful distress,
Where there are no contenders,
Just unhappiness,
Life seems like a shadow,
That travels back and forth,
Darkness, a step away
Frustration, of course.
No where to go,
No where to stay
And this drowning Silence,
That rivets you away,
That chokes a little more,
Each passing day.
Gone are the smiles,
That with you one day,
We shared together,
Like children at play.
But Life is not easy,
Solitude less,
Love is a necessity,
Above all else.
Gone are the smiles, That with you one day, We shared together, Like children at play.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I think this was a well chosen metaphor for this poem, it sparks a nostalgia, a yearning, in and of itself. Excellent, Sandra.10
We all need to both give and receive love. Peace and love, Sandra
Life seems like a shadow. Unhappiness darkens the steps of life. Frustration breaks life's status. With day, smiles are gone away. This poem is wonderful and sadness is wisely presented in this poem...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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