These rosy petals,
fresh and fragrant once,
of my Valentine's flower
now look withered
I keep them upon
the platter of my heart-
my cherished treasure-
the feelings of love,
the wind, water, and the fire
associated with them,
whither would they leave?
beyond these four walls,
where they reverberate-
My dear, you reside there
forever reared
in my memories revere
12th February 2010
One's emotions of love are not confined to any particular day, a flower given by the loved one, remains precious, regardless of which day of the year it was received. The essance of this beautiful write goes beyond time and space, reflect your deep thoughts and proves your skill, a lovely poem and with substance and meaning! regards
A lovely poem with reverence for the loved one My dear you residether Forever, reared in my memories revere memories last longer than life and continue to replenish our spirit.you have treated the subject with so much gentleness and delicacy. 10 Mamta
True to a loved one, that reside in your heart forever.10
Indeed beautiful... wonderful expressions of love... a touching write. Excellent as usual.
A really nice poem, love is amazing and the way you express it is amazing, thanks for sharing
Lovely Kesavji... Truly well written simple but rich piece of work.
Deathless entity of 'Perfect Love'...I'll not add the cliched say why only V Day [just 1 day] for Love... Its a relentless flow of Bliss without greed of Hiss...wat in vogue today... Perfect Ten [PT] Love is rare and scare... And you've sculpted that PT 10 from feelings Ms. Nivedita UK
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Deeply touching, this poem reverberates with the memories of not so long ago enveloping the present with desire that froths like the foam of the waves from the sea. Your poetic touch to the thoughts of many brings you to the fore as one of the finest on this the site. May god be with you in all that you endeavour.....Mandara