There is no shame
although O' flower
you're naked
but you're beautiful,
cause your activeness is in
spreading beautiful fragrance
and beautification of world.
but its shameful that
my activeness is in
beastly conduct
although I'm not undress!
Thanks a lot Dear Poet Mahtab Bangalee for your valuable thoughtful comment
A beautiful poem that amply deserves the honour, my congratulations to the poet for the beauty penned.
Let me imagine again, the naked flower spreading her fragrance. Yep! I can smell her now! ,
Truth can live n a k e d easily where the Falsehood need make up/// yes
Keep spreading your " beautiful fragrance" fly if needed. For we must be treated with love and respect.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful piece of poetry.
What a greatest contrast! The woman is naked but the man is not undressed..... yet a most beautiful thought-provoking poem, congratulations as The Member Poem Of The Day, Britte!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
truly penned the words of heat- thanks for sharing
Thanks a lot Dear Mahtab Bangalee