When the beats are low and visions are light,
Often, in my dreams, I see an unseen sight.
Through nervous passage to uneasy chore,
My anxious sensation does open the door.
It’s vast and beautiful; the pure and divine,
I blink my eyes, and wonder, if it’s mine.
If crawl or run; me, the clueless, a new born,
Perhaps, too insane to anticipate due morn.
The wind, the guide, and few lessons to fly,
Though fledge less flight; I measure the sky.
Chasing your foot marks, scattered over sea;
You; the noble, the glorified or that’s only me!
Sudden twist and turn; it’s fortune-wheel,
A loud, reechoing call back; rising in peal.
Let me be stay here; I beg, I cry and request,
But destiny arrives, along with never easy test.
Either endless peace or desires extreme,
An inauspicious pick, the end of my dream.
If you look at the mind like I do after a blast damages your brain, you have to put yourself back together, senses can be cultivated cultured, and not controlled other than by monitoring our perceptions, balancing our gut and..... oh yes the feelings 1-2-3-4-5-6-7 and many many more ..... you want to take the next line and then I'll take the next It is not about who it is about why? and in the language arts the first and last syllable is always the same
loved the way you used simple language! think you've got a great poem here! i rated it a 10. keep writing... give us more.
your language is really simple. It bothered me for the most part but overall your message was clear and concise.
This is an excellent piece of poetry and is maturely written, the language and voice that you use is wonderful. I bequeath to you 10 marks.
Nice poem, yes dreams are great without any boundries, I like it
The magnificent obsession of a vivid and alluring dream that lurks in the sub-conscious given birth through this beautiful poem. Very good writing. { Comments are reciprocal}
Well done Prakah and if no dreams in life what else we take?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A poem in simple words, narrating the experiance in a dream, well written.