Often, In My Dreams. Poem by Prakash Mehra

Often, In My Dreams.

Rating: 4.7


When the beats are low and visions are light,
Often, in my dreams, I see an unseen sight.
Through nervous passage to uneasy chore,
My anxious sensation does open the door.
It’s vast and beautiful; the pure and divine,
I blink my eyes, and wonder, if it’s mine.
If crawl or run; me, the clueless, a new born,
Perhaps, too insane to anticipate due morn.
The wind, the guide, and few lessons to fly,
Though fledge less flight; I measure the sky.
Chasing your foot marks, scattered over sea;
You; the noble, the glorified or that’s only me!
Sudden twist and turn; it’s fortune-wheel,
A loud, reechoing call back; rising in peal.
Let me be stay here; I beg, I cry and request,
But destiny arrives, along with never easy test.
Either endless peace or desires extreme,
An inauspicious pick, the end of my dream.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 29 November 2009

A poem in simple words, narrating the experiance in a dream, well written.

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Joseph Stotz 19 November 2009

If you look at the mind like I do after a blast damages your brain, you have to put yourself back together, senses can be cultivated cultured, and not controlled other than by monitoring our perceptions, balancing our gut and..... oh yes the feelings 1-2-3-4-5-6-7 and many many more ..... you want to take the next line and then I'll take the next It is not about who it is about why? and in the language arts the first and last syllable is always the same

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T. Q. Sims 18 November 2009

loved the way you used simple language! think you've got a great poem here! i rated it a 10. keep writing... give us more.

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Halana Williams 18 November 2009

your language is really simple. It bothered me for the most part but overall your message was clear and concise.

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Rebecca R. 18 November 2009

This is an excellent piece of poetry and is maturely written, the language and voice that you use is wonderful. I bequeath to you 10 marks.

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Eyan Desir 17 January 2011

Very nice poem good work

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Jansen Felton 29 November 2010

This poem is so deep and perceptive...Great job!

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Suja Nair 28 November 2010

Nice poem, yes dreams are great without any boundries, I like it

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kunjubi Varghese 26 November 2010

The magnificent obsession of a vivid and alluring dream that lurks in the sub-conscious given birth through this beautiful poem. Very good writing. { Comments are reciprocal}

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Nimal Dunuhinga 09 December 2009

Well done Prakah and if no dreams in life what else we take?

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