When I think of you, my eyes turn wet,
But, when you think of me, your face turns red,
The tears or the smile,
Which approach is good?
Its often, I call you to the wonderland,
But, you always pull me back to this real world,
The wonder land or the real world,
Which approach is good?
If I do, I announce, I care a lot for you,
You too do, but hide, never let me get the clue,
To hide or to announce,
Which approach is good?
I express my love with no ifs and buts,
You value my sentiments, respect the efforts,
To love or to value,
Which approach is good?
i like this poem.... it kinda seems like what im going thru....=(
Great poem! I give you 10 marks. And as for which approach is best, I'd say that the best is to be in a dream world and to be thought of fondly with tears rather than the smile, because it is the truest and most genuine of the two, at least to me...
nice poem, i feel Love and Value goes hand in hand, both come first
luv the fact that most ppl at sum point in their lyf actually do wonder bout which world they belong in. luved the poem.
Hi... This a fabulous poem. Which approach is good. I confuse and hesitate many time in my life. But final I can decide to choose the one. Fantactic writing.. Nice to know you Pang
Your poems are very simple and very much interesting to read. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love is just love, it's hard to put values or anything upon it.