Oh Heart Of Mine..... Poem by Valerie Dohren

Oh heart of mine don`t tarry long Amongst the woeful earthly throng this is a bold opening very deep............it shortly narrates what all you had penned successively........

beautiful a heart longing for the one true divine spiritual love. The one fromour maker. so very well written.

another wonderul heart warming poem, Valerie. Extremely well written.

Hmmm it really beautiful, soft and gentle poem, sweet and a bit bitter experience sounds like a sweet dark chocolate...i like it :) very well done poem, enjoyed it with nice rhyme...yum yum_Unwritten Soul

Always nice to hear such soft metered rhyme and then I go off and crash and clang. Beautiful words to match the tempo and aura of this poem.

Oh heart of mine be still today Let not your dreams be blown away Do not be broken and forlorn Tomorrow brings another dawn. A Ray of hope your are giving to all your readers. loved these lines.. thank you very much dear Poetess.

You do have a way with words for sure, you catch the eye and the mind and then the heart of anyone who has ever loved another. Thank you for that.

I had to read it one more time Val. This time with the words of your message ringing in my ears, and it brought home the truth of this beautiful poem. The thing we wish for our loved ones more than any other thing is heaven. I understand. God bless.

Harmonious in words yet so sad...to me..with a lifting tie....thanks valerie for sharing

While reading this poem it seemed that there should be no closing lines...Superb feeling.Ah!