Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 6,772 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Oh Heart Of Mine..... - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Oh heart of mine don`t tarry long
Amongst the woeful earthly throng
Oh let me bide in worlds above
To feel that great celestial love

Oh heart of mine don`t linger here
To dwell in sadness, pain and fear
Relinquish yet the dark unknown
Think not to ever be alone

Oh heart of mine beat silently
That none may know, nor hear, nor see
How moves the sorrow hidden deep
To take my soul, to take my sleep

Oh heart of mine be still today
Let not your dreams be blown away
Do not be broken and forlorn
Tomorrow brings another dawn

Upon the wings of hope to fly
Above the clouds, beyond the sky,
To touch a land of peace divine
My spirit with the stars align

Comments about Oh Heart Of Mine..... by Valerie Dohren

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (8/25/2015 9:26:00 AM)

    Oh heart of mine be still today
    Let not your dreams be blown away
    Do not be broken and forlorn
    Tomorrow brings another dawn. A Ray of hope your are giving to all your readers. loved these lines.. thank you very much dear Poetess.
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  • (7/24/2015 3:27:00 PM)

    You do have a way with words for sure, you catch the eye and the mind and then the heart of anyone who has ever loved another. Thank you for that. (Report) Reply

  • Juan Olivarez (7/3/2012 4:07:00 PM)

    I had to read it one more time Val. This time with the words of your message ringing in my ears, and it brought home the truth of this beautiful poem. The thing we wish for our loved ones more than any other thing is heaven. I understand. God bless. (Report) Reply

  • (6/22/2012 2:53:00 PM)

    Harmonious in words yet so me..with a lifting tie....thanks valerie for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (6/22/2012 6:44:00 AM)

    While reading this poem it seemed that there should be no closing lines...Superb feeling.Ah! (Report) Reply

  • Swetha Vanakayalapati (6/22/2012 5:41:00 AM)

    Oh heart of mine don`t tarry long
    Amongst the woeful earthly throng

    this is a bold opening very shortly narrates what all you had penned successively........
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  • Juan Olivarez (6/20/2012 9:48:00 AM)

    beautiful a heart longing for the one true divine spiritual love. The one fromour maker. so very well written. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (6/19/2012 9:43:00 AM)

    another wonderul heart warming poem, Valerie. Extremely well written. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (6/16/2012 12:31:00 AM)

    Hmmm it really beautiful, soft and gentle poem, sweet and a bit bitter experience sounds like a sweet dark chocolate...i like it :) very well done poem, enjoyed it with nice rhyme...yum yum_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (6/14/2012 2:07:00 PM)

    Always nice to hear such soft metered rhyme
    and then I go off and crash and clang.
    Beautiful words to match the tempo and
    aura of this poem.
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  • (6/14/2012 8:15:00 AM)

    a beautiful poem with good rhythm and rhymes..... (Report) Reply

  • Vincent Kuo (6/14/2012 7:37:00 AM)

    Wow, thank you for this lovely poem! I was caught by your 4th stanza: Oh heart of mine, be still today... what a subtle and elegant way to describe - this is literary genius! I think you speak for all of us, the hope and faith for what lies beyond. Truly a powerful poem! (Report) Reply

  • (6/12/2012 11:41:00 PM)

    A very nice poem, with beauty in its verse and a journey of hope for the spirit. (Report) Reply

  • Godfrey Morris (6/11/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    Wonderful words of poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (6/11/2012 10:32:00 AM)

    Beautiful and inspiring poem. Very well written.
    I love the wisdom expressed here in wonderful verses
    Also very good rhyming
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  • (6/11/2012 8:26:00 AM)

    A really beautiful poem with real emotion.
    A great write.
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  • Simon Collins (6/11/2012 4:45:00 AM)

    A beautiful spirit is reflected here, thank you (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (6/11/2012 4:42:00 AM)

    It doesn't matter what one's personal beliefs are, a beautiful poem is always a beautiful poem, as this is Val. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (6/10/2012 9:33:00 AM)

    So beautiful Val, so heartfelt with such deep meaning, a wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

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