Friday, May 15, 2009

Old Age

Rating: 5.0
A spider marking time.
Casting a net of rhymes.
Building upon our lives.
Music of a solemn fife.
Woman's anguish of youth.
Crying memory, brings disputes.
Old man watching along.
Decayed words of songs.
Spider cocoons it's catch.
Lid down, the coffin latch.

5/15/09 POEWHIT

Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 November 2009
Fantastic poetic touch down with toppings of irony...! Ten++ niv
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Patti Masterman 25 September 2009
The more I read it, the more I like it. Catchy and succinct. My kind of writing..(smile)
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Skillful writing Joe. It has a great flow and a surprise and extremely effective ending. 10 love Karin
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Kranthi Pothineni 26 August 2009
This 10 liner write made to read it twice. Well Said.
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Splendid! Vivid! ! Lucid! ! ! A big hand Joe, with smiling ten dr. sakti
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Ritty Patnaik 13 June 2009
there is the otherside to futility of old age.the years of happy, happenings, experiences of life all add.up to our state of mind.your poem ofcourse speaks of eternal truth! from dust we shall go.good write
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Naidz Ladia 25 May 2009
a very nice time moves, age increases too..
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really sad this body should age..we have to be prepared for the catch
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rago rago 15 May 2009
an enjoyable write........of old age.......we have to accept........thank you for your kind sharing.....
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