Old Pictures Poem by Sandra Fowler

Old Pictures

Rating: 5.0


Clouds hang old pictures on the wavering air,
Like wine wallpaper threadbare to the light.
Cold leaves cut shadows on the poet's cheek.
The clarity is bell like to the bone.

The sun pulls down the heavy cloth of sky,
Muffles the scissor sound of rising wind.
One red bird burns upon the rim of dark.
God knows what name would bring him winging back.

Previously published, 'Appalachian Heritage'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 09 February 2008

Picturesque, absolutely beautiful, a painted picture in words. You are amazing Sandra, I love your work. Melvina

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Meggie Gultiano 30 December 2007

Excellent write Sandra.. I love it!

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Bill Grace 17 October 2007

Thank you Sandra. A phrase like: 'the scissor sound of rising wind' Phew! So wonderful. Bill Grace

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Robert Howard 12 February 2007

Every line quivers with overtones of life force. Intoxicating to the senses.

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Esther Leclerc 10 February 2007

Your poems shimmer with aching beauty, yet never neglect content (meaning, feeling) ... Thank you. Esther xx

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Roshni Shine 11 October 2016

Well done work, the way you've wrote this poem really inspires me!

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Raj Nandy 07 September 2009

Sandra, You are a master painter of poetic imagery in words! 10+ =Raj

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premji premji 04 June 2009

the red bird... i love to call him SUN..............

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Mamta Agarwal 05 December 2008

you paint with words, and your images are so evocative. although here there are no rhymes, but still the poem has music and rhythm. every time i read any of your poems, i just hang on to each line, amazing vision.10 Mamta

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Alison Cassidy 07 March 2008

The clarity of your images continues to astonish in this mesmerizing piece that paints, with light and grace, the last rays of the setting sun. 'The clarity is bell like to the bone.' and 'the scissor sound of rising wind.' are particularly evocative metaphors. Superb. love, Alison ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler

Sandra Fowler

W. Columbia, WV, USA
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