Old News Poem by Sandra Fowler

Old News

Rating: 4.9


Time over Tuesday, August almost gone,
So little left of summer to dream on.
I write a poem on the windowglass.
Quatrains waver like shadows in the grass.

One feels as if all life is lost in form.
Only sun's metaphor can keep us warm.
A lone, nostalgic whistle in the hills,
Tells me our train has come, the moment chills.

You turn my collar up against the sound.
Gray smoke configures good-bye on the ground.
The picture is too beautiful to lose
Your eyes tell me that Tuesday is old news.

Copyright,2007, Sandra Fowler

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Howard 18 August 2007

This has a mood that strikes me as both intimate and timeless. Very wistful and meticulously crafted.

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Dion Barker 17 August 2007

10 / 10 lovley poem sandre i wish i could have some of your talent.... love abi.

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R H 16 August 2007

A wonderfully lyrical poem that stirs the senses each in turn. Your observations on the passing of time are so beautifully captured.Justine.

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Marvin Brato 14 August 2007

Great poem Sandra.... full of senses in life's panorama! Thanks for bringing joy. Regards.

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Nicola Burkett 13 August 2007

Fantastic write, as ever Misss Fowler.. It pains me that summer has almost gone. But i smile again knowing that firey autumn is almost here. Hugs Nix xxx

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 October 2022

A lone, nostalgic whistle in the hills, Tells me our train has come, the moment chills...great expression dear Sandra. It's a brilliant poem.

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Sonya Florentino 25 February 2009

tender, heartbreaking.... almost cinematic

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Tom J. Mariani 07 November 2007

I'm putting this one right next to one of Emily Dickinson's epigrams. 'What Miracles the News is! Not Bismark but ourselves.'

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Bill Grace 11 September 2007

It elicits a gentle chuckle from me that I do not understand but enjoy. Bill Grace

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Melvina Germain 24 August 2007

I'm a little late finding this one Sandra, it's all been said. I'll add you are an exceptional poet and I enjoy your work. Thanks for the wonderful read Sandra. --Melvina--

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W. Columbia, WV, USA
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