Omen Poem by Linda Hepner

Omen

Rating: 5.0


In the city where my son lives
I saw an eagle
hovering over his house.
I told them: there’s an eagle…
An eagle? And they laughed. Mom’s once again
got llamas on the brain, and now it’s eagles.
Come in and help us with your grandson,
teach him how to speak, he’s waiting for your stories.
Little pigs, the big bad troll, the baby bear
or make one up – an eagle, he’ll like that.
I tell my silent, big eyed grandson about Jack,
who climbed up into heaven
to outwit a giant.

In the city where my son lives
and babies had been born
I saw three vultures, hooded, crouching on the roof.
I told them: there are vultures…
as I kissed the newborn girls.
This time they ran outside and looked up, shuddered.
“I knew you never saw an eagle, ” said my son.
“I thought I heard them landing”, said his wife
and ran her twins indoors.
My grandson, big-eyed, ever mute, sat waiting for my stories:
I told him about wolves,
knocking on doors, climbing on the roof
to eat a little pig, the third of three.

In that city where my son lives
with his little family
I counted sixty vultures
sitting on the euchalyptus trees
weighing down the branches,
waiting for the dusk.
As I approached ten lifted off
and circled round and round
the street, the garden, trees and house
then landed on the roof,
roosting like hungry householders.
Inside, the babies crawled
on the carpet, their mother baked cookies,
their father fixed a faulty fan,
and I told stories to my ever silent
grandson, waiting for my constant, rhythmic repetitions,
Fee fi fo fum…. I’m a troll roll de roll,
Little Pig, Little Pig,
let me…. let me… SPEAK dammit,
let me
come in.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 27 November 2008

Linda - In the last Discover Magazine they talk about schizophrenia and autism as being two new genetic evolutions, adaptions to this world we have given them. If we can ever make it safe again, perhaps they can return. Many hopes for a lovely thanksgiving day to you - cheryl

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Chuck Audette 30 June 2006

Wonderful write, loved the increasing sense of trepidation. Are the Republicans coming to your town? -chuck

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Pj James 12 June 2006

Love the allusion towards children's fables and stories.. very dark, but pretty all the same

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Gina Onyemaechi 12 June 2006

Spooky stuff. More a mini-story than a poem, but a gripping story at that. Love, Gina.

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Brian Dorn 11 June 2006

Linda, with vultures circling, the stuff about the wolves and giants seems pretty mild. Interesting and attentive read, I can see why Yoav enjoys your stories! Brian

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