from 'While Passing Through'/Spring
Spring. Sun-drenched sidewalk.
Girl on a pink bicycle
pedals out of sight.
Lovely! Did you intend to play with the word pedals? Is she an early spring flower that disappears? Can't wait to see the colours of spring.
hey, laurie! glad you liked it. no, i did not intend a pun on petals. this little poem reports something i saw in my inner eye, my imagination- i don't know why. it was lovely to me- and fleeting- and mysterious. pedals away was just an efficient way to phrase it. good to hear from you! -glen
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love that pink colour. It's beautiful to imagine the scene... wonderful.
Thanks! This poem, rare for my haiku, was imagined. The image just dropped into my mind. I too like the pink color. -Glen