On The Beach (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

On The Beach (Haiku)

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far across the sea
a boat vanishes in waves—
lonely horizon

Saturday, February 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,melancholy,seaside
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajesh Thankappan 07 March 2016

Has the boat sunk at the horizon or just vanished out of sight? I will stick to the first interpretation. After mayhem normalcy returns and we pretend all is well, as if nothing has ever happened.

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Souren Mondal 29 February 2016

Sometimes people feel lonely while staring at the horizon, standing alone one the beach.. Thank you for sharing Mihaela... The haiku captures the mind..

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Kelly Kurt 27 February 2016

An excellent Haiku, Mihaela. Perfect in every way.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 February 2016

Lonely Horizon! Nice work.

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