On The Bridge(A Steampunk Poem) Poem by Kostas Lagos

On The Bridge(A Steampunk Poem)

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Walking on the bridge
over the dark fierce river
staring at the old building
lit by neon lights;
clouded with smoke
crawling out of chimneys
grey as stormy clouds.
I 'm standing there, open my flask
and take a sip of rum.
Zeppelins floating through
the air above me
and I 'm jealously watching them
passing by, leaving me there
with a half mechanic dog
lying on my feet.

Saturday, November 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: city,dog,futuristic,mechanic,old,river
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 08 December 2018

this sounds more like Back To The Future ** with zeppelins mentioned! ! ! but, ok, half mechanic dog touches on the topic futuristic IF you refer to a half-robot-half-flesh-and-blood dog. ** movie title from 1980s favorite lines: clouded with smoke crawling out of chimneys grey as stormy clouds. bri (:

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Kostas Lagos 10 December 2018

Michael J. Fox! What a movie! All three of them. Don't feed the dog! Thank you

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