On The Death Of A Youth Poem by Mohammad Akmal Nazir

On The Death Of A Youth

Rating: 3.5


Ah lovely rose!
Thou art faded in the prime,
Thou were to scatter more light and more beauty,
Millions of others withered
Before they could blossom,
The garden could never enjoy their grandeur.
From where thou did come?
And where thou did go?
Who knows?
The show is on
But thy glory
will never be seen.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 07 December 2010

What an excellent poem, very well expressed. Usually I do not share my fellow poets opinions, and this time is no exception, I think this is a ten, I really do. great poem.I give it a ten.

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Ravi Sathasivam 22 November 2010

Well expressed poem. Beautifully written with deep feelings. Thanks for sharing with me 10+

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Audrey Heller 17 November 2010

Beautifully done! It's sad, to think about a young person dying, way before their time. But, life does go on, just the same. Thanks for sharing!

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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