poet Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Abortion

The blow was very cruel,
The bud could not blossom,
It died underneath,
And who cares?
The loss was a tribute
To the overenthusiasm of sowing the seeds.

Poem Submitted: Friday, November 26, 2010
Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 12, 2011

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  • Sally Plumb Plumb (9/20/2017 6:38:00 AM)

    Over excited you say.Would have been a good flower.

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  • Kameswara Rao ChellapillaKameswara Rao Chellapilla (4/23/2017 6:30:00 AM)

    Very Philosophical poem. All is accidental and based on probable situations I guess!

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  • Alex Walker (11/17/2012 4:52:00 PM)

    This poem really packs a punch. It may be small, but it has so much to read into. I enjoy it.

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  • Marissa Rodgers (9/24/2012 9:39:00 PM)

    This poem is very well written and to the point. After reading a second time I read even more into it. Very nice! May God be with and protect all the unborn babies!

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  • Siyabonga A Nxumalo (11/16/2011 2:52:00 PM)

    simple and well written, , outstanding..i give you 10++ here Akmal.

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  • Esther Ayala (7/25/2011 5:42:00 PM)

    I love reading your Poems, though it seems more like Poetry, beautiful! I only wish I could write more poetry. I'm just not good at reading the meanings behind it, I have difficulty in understanding, it takes great talent to do something like that. Please read and rate my poem on an Unborn Child, it is also on abortion.

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  • Lariel Morihsta (7/22/2011 11:14:00 PM)

    i see what you are trying to say in this poem, truthfully it is a good poem, but by playing with the words, you can make it more stronger. Keep it up

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  • Mark Louie Cañete (7/12/2011 8:42:00 PM)

    very realistict it mirrors what is happening in the present! keep it up!

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  • Siyabonga Sikhakhane (7/12/2011 5:27:00 AM)

    Simple and intense I like it

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  • Alistair Fraser-peters (7/11/2011 5:25:00 PM)

    Its succinctness felt like a very sharp knife suddenly ending a very fragile life and left me momentarily stunned: therefore it has done its job extremely well. I don't like to rate works of art - that's Simon Cowell territory: -)

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  • Eman Awad (7/10/2011 11:52:00 AM)

    so simple and really well written, amazing, it describes abortion perfectly
    well done, rated 10 ofcourse...

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  • Trinny Ruizi (7/9/2011 5:37:00 PM)

    So true! I liked it, it is good

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  • Khembottra OumKhembottra Oum (7/8/2011 12:37:00 PM)

    Really good poem. Not the kinda topic I usually read but good nonetheless.

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  • Akshita Yadav (7/8/2011 6:05:00 AM)

    well written, precise in emotion as well as description

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  • David Taylor (7/7/2011 6:10:00 AM)

    nice, thanx for reading, commenting and rating mine too :)

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  • Adisty Mulianty (7/6/2011 8:03:00 PM)

    wow, , , in just simple words u describe the emotion inside... wonderful piece.. rate it 10 - very nice indeed....

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  • Alfonso SiverlsAlfonso Siverls (7/6/2011 6:41:00 PM)

    Very good, i could feel the strong emotions in the poem. I rate it 10

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  • Antonio Liao (7/5/2011 11:59:00 PM)

    It’s a renaissance of birth of Life....a victory in the making....a concept crafted to preserve mankind....hope and pray that all must read this kind of Lines...God bless and a 10 +++++

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  • Micmac MccroryMicmac Mccrory (7/5/2011 8:53:00 AM)

    A very good description of abortion. This would make a perfect description in a dictionary for abortion.

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  • Kaycie Cooper (7/5/2011 2:26:00 AM)

    It was short and too the point, but yet, there's so much said in between those lines. A well written message, a 10 in my book. Bravo.

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