The blow was very cruel,
The bud could not blossom,
It died underneath,
And who cares?
The loss was a tribute
To the overenthusiasm of sowing the seeds.
so simple and really well written, amazing, it describes abortion perfectly well done, rated 10 ofcourse...
Its succinctness felt like a very sharp knife suddenly ending a very fragile life and left me momentarily stunned: therefore it has done its job extremely well. I don't like to rate works of art - that's Simon Cowell territory: -)
Very Philosophical poem. All is accidental and based on probable situations I guess!
This poem really packs a punch. It may be small, but it has so much to read into. I enjoy it.
This poem is very well written and to the point. After reading a second time I read even more into it. Very nice! May God be with and protect all the unborn babies!
simple and well written, , outstanding..i give you 10++ here Akmal.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love reading your Poems, though it seems more like Poetry, beautiful! I only wish I could write more poetry. I'm just not good at reading the meanings behind it, I have difficulty in understanding, it takes great talent to do something like that. Please read and rate my poem on an Unborn Child, it is also on abortion.