On The Eve Of Christmasss Poem by akram saqib

On The Eve Of Christmasss

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I saw and I found
Bleeding humanity all around
Hatred, revenge and pride
Sneaking from its every wound
Nations with chains of ego
Everywhere are ghastly bound
Snatching from one another
Hollow bones like hound
Imprisoned in opaque cells
No light where, no sound
Religions, sects, castes and colors
End not fight but rebound
In the whirlpools of animosity
Sinking man in the pound
LET US PRAY FOR THE MAN
O sky! Stars! And o ground!
Love affection and respect
May spread all around

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 28 December 2009

If only we could raise ourselves above and beyond the limitations of our narrow minds, a lovely poem, I'm all along by your side and join you in your prayers!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 22 December 2009

very nice one! really brave and poetic! powerful!

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Pranab K Chakraborty 20 December 2009

you can't expect any coment from me, you have uttered the thoughts like slogans. you have already told everything like a saint or like a leader. so where is my place is there please! next time when you will write a poem again I will react but definitely with the slogans. thak you, write more apoet bangla

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Abdullah Musa 19 December 2009

If only few more could have your kind of attitude this world will be a better place. A very nice reflective poem. Bravo! ! !

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Abdullah Musa 19 December 2009

If only few more could have your kind of your attitude this world will be a better place. A very nice reflective poem. Bravo! ! !

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