akram saqib

Freshman - 547 Points (14 APRIL / SAHIWAL)

On The Eve Of Christmasss - Poem by akram saqib

I saw and I found
Bleeding humanity all around
Hatred, revenge and pride
Sneaking from its every wound
Nations with chains of ego
Everywhere are ghastly bound
Snatching from one another
Hollow bones like hound
Imprisoned in opaque cells
No light where, no sound
Religions, sects, castes and colors
End not fight but rebound
In the whirlpools of animosity
Sinking man in the pound
LET US PRAY FOR THE MAN
O sky! Stars! And o ground!
Love affection and respect
May spread all around


Comments about On The Eve Of Christmasss by akram saqib

  • (12/28/2009 9:04:00 AM)


    If only we could raise ourselves above and beyond the limitations of our narrow minds, a lovely poem, I'm all along by your side and join you in your prayers! (Report) Reply

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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/22/2009 4:21:00 AM)


    very nice one! really brave and poetic! powerful! (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (12/20/2009 11:29:00 PM)


    you can't expect any coment from me, you have uttered the thoughts like slogans. you have already told everything like a saint or like a leader. so where is my place is there please!

    next time when you will write a poem again I will react but definitely with the slogans.

    thak you, write more

    apoet bangla
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  • (12/19/2009 9:03:00 PM)


    If only few more could have your kind of attitude this world will be a better place. A very nice reflective poem. Bravo! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/19/2009 9:03:00 PM)


    If only few more could have your kind of your attitude this world will be a better place. A very nice reflective poem. Bravo! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 19, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 27, 2010


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