Come on, number you count,
Count and count on mount.
Account of your action tells,
Awake, here time again bells.
On the top of mount you sit,
With meditation soon you fit.
Gift is this life of precious, feel,
By practice once mind you heal.
Time moves we move in circle,
We take birth here to encircle.
Look inside life and feel soon,
We perceive sure father's boon.
Noon time mount is seen far,
From around area this is star.
We are lucky to reach mount,
To earn virtue is our amount.
Miscount not you all do realize,
Father comes here does idealize.
We have to learn all, no discount,
Now we are on top of the mount.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,14 March 2015. All rights reserved.
Reading this lovely poem times again I am happy. This is heart touching poem.
Miscount not you all do realize, Father comes here does idealize. We have to learn all, no discount, Now we are on top of the mount.. the solitude, the peace and tranquility on the top of the mountain with the eternal Father. tony
On top of mount we do meditation. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.
A great spiritual poem, no surprise Mahakul Ji is master of writing such poems.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
picture of eleanor prince xSo much in the way of perception and insight do I find in your carefully conceived poem - we have the gift of being able to pause in life as if on the top of a mountain, to feel our emotions and meditate response to the world, to generations past and present and yet to come, to our inner selves, as we seek integrity and virtue 14 Mar 2015 by eleanor prince | Reply picture of Fraga K-r xThe only place to be. Mountain top existence! 14 Mar 2015 by Fraga K-r | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x.....beautiful rhyming...on top of the mountain is the freshest air ever ★ 15 Mar 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of RAJ NANDY xThanks for this meaningful verse! -Raj 15 Mar 2015 by RAJ NANDY | Reply