On The Top Of The Mount Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

On The Top Of The Mount

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Come on, number you count,
Count and count on mount.
Account of your action tells,
Awake, here time again bells.

On the top of mount you sit,
With meditation soon you fit.
Gift is this life of precious, feel,
By practice once mind you heal.

Time moves we move in circle,
We take birth here to encircle.
Look inside life and feel soon,
We perceive sure father's boon.

Noon time mount is seen far,
From around area this is star.
We are lucky to reach mount,
To earn virtue is our amount.

Miscount not you all do realize,
Father comes here does idealize.
We have to learn all, no discount,
Now we are on top of the mount.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,14 March 2015. All rights reserved.

Saturday, November 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle,mountain,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2016

picture of eleanor prince xSo much in the way of perception and insight do I find in your carefully conceived poem - we have the gift of being able to pause in life as if on the top of a mountain, to feel our emotions and meditate response to the world, to generations past and present and yet to come, to our inner selves, as we seek integrity and virtue 14 Mar 2015 by eleanor prince | Reply picture of Fraga K-r xThe only place to be. Mountain top existence! 14 Mar 2015 by Fraga K-r | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x.....beautiful rhyming...on top of the mountain is the freshest air ever ★ 15 Mar 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of RAJ NANDY xThanks for this meaningful verse! -Raj 15 Mar 2015 by RAJ NANDY | Reply

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Pushpendra Patel 24 October 2020

Reading this lovely poem times again I am happy. This is heart touching poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 January 2020

Miscount not you all do realize, Father comes here does idealize. We have to learn all, no discount, Now we are on top of the mount.. the solitude, the peace and tranquility on the top of the mountain with the eternal Father. tony

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

On top of mount we do meditation. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 March 2017

Father's boon! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 November 2016

A great spiritual poem, no surprise Mahakul Ji is master of writing such poems.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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