Ominous Omen Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Ominous Omen

Rating: 5.0


One day in my friend’s house I slept there,
On a wooden ataman I slept in proper care.
Owing to a long journey I did get asleep,
Obnoxiously I got a nightmare in mind deep.

Obscurantism was going on among the people,
Obsequiously some were remaining in simple.
Obscure was their argument I did feel bitter,
Obstructive mind wasn’t good I thought better.

Outbreak and outburst came out soon,
Outcry ran speedily it was then noon.
Out and way commotion was critical,
Overawing mind showed as it was practical.

‘Oh’ I said and I did get up from sleep,
Overturn I felt ‘earthquake’ heard from lip.
Oppressive flood, I saw, took many lives,
Opposition among people had sword and knives.

Owl hooted, dog barked, and cat did mew,
Ominous omens are these I thought Age is due.
Oh! My nightmare broke down and I came to know,
Overthrow of Confluence Age is coming let’s owe.

Thursday, September 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjukta Nag 11 September 2015

Outstanding oeuvre.....10

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Alesia Leach 11 September 2015

A wonderful example of Anaphors.

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Akhtar Jawad 12 September 2015

Owl hooted, dog barked, and cat did mew, Ominous omens are these I thought Age is due. Oh! My nightmare broke down and I came to know, Overthrow of Confluence Age is coming let’s owe. Kumarmani Mahakul, only Kumarmani Mahakul can think so much and can covert his thoughts in such a thoughtful poem.........10

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Valsa George 13 September 2015

Such nightmares may be the indication of the onset of some disastrous events! It is believed that howls hoot, wolves howl and dogs bark just before the outbreak of an earthquake or a tsunami.... as animals are more sensitive to Nature's changes! Great write!

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Liza Sudina 13 September 2015

OW! only O-s in the beginning! ! ! I love these OU sound. want to reread the poem! magnificent!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of laura loveheart xA clever piece, tfs, [3 10 Sep 2015 by laura loveheart | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xLovely Sir. 10 Sep 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xAmazing writing Kumarmani! Thank you so much for sharing! 11 Sep 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of antonio liao x...lure to interpret dream of mine, so fascinating and clever that dream have open the sky of wisdom; worth to remembered the past dream and settle to make comfortable to the past good-bye. like moisture of hope beyond the fantasy of the third dimension of life. God bledd 11 Sep 2015 by antonio liao | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xWonderfully penned my dear wise friend tfs xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings 11 Sep 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Elena S(*_*) xBeautiful, wise and deep! Excellent choice of words, thank you! 18 Sep 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply

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Amitava Sur 15 September 2015

These sort of nightmares is a result of an apprehension in our subconscious mind, which can foresee some bad time or destruction ahead and thus cautioning us with this gloomy obscurity. Very thoughtful write and enlightening one.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 September 2015

Obstructive mind! With the muse of the nature of things around. Nice work.

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David Wood 14 September 2015

Outstanding Opulent poetry Opens the mind

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 13 September 2015

Sir, let us pray for peace and a cessation to all our nightmares. Thanks for sharing this poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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