On The Waves Of Emotions. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

On The Waves Of Emotions.

Rating: 5.0


Thoughts making wave in my head,
Heart becomes vast like the sky,
And you left me alone in the desert of life
To count the dune of mountains.

In the lonely island,
My emotions gathered like clouds
To test my patience,
And tears started to flow like a river.

As I started to recoup my resources,
To make a masterpiece.
You reappeared out of the blue,
Now we sail together on waves of emotions.

Monday, February 1, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 01 February 2021

And you left me alone in the desert of life / To count the dune of mountains. Fantastic!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 February 2021

Lovely poem Asim ji, full of emotion, with words crafted so beautifully.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 February 2021

You reappeared out of the blue, Now we sail together on waves of emotions.Amazing clue of the sad poem. Let us hope of the best. Thank you for sharing!

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Mamta S 01 February 2021

Beautiful expression. Liked the wordings reflecting true feelings.

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Mamta S 01 February 2021

A perfect 5* poem.

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Varsha M 01 February 2021

So the new company is quite good to fathom the desert dunes. Life is this only

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