M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,492 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

On Your Birthday - My Niece - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

You came into our lives
Like fresh punch of air
To fill the gap between
Life and love

We saw you grow
Inch by inch every day
As your naughtiness
Turned to demands with
Mood swings and seriousness

We are still wondering
How time flew past
And how tiny bird
Searched its own path
To make its own identity

Life showed you the path
To choose between
And you with your heart
Is on the way to make
Your decisions

We know you will not
Disappoint any of us
With your choice
And will make
all of us proud

You are the pioneer
Of our generation
And you have
As many followers
Looking up to you

May Almighty-Allah guide you
Bless you and help you
To succeed in whatever
Way you choose in life
And make your journey
A memorable one

Topic(s) of this poem: birthday greetings

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

On the birthday of my Niece Syeda Ifrah.

Comments about On Your Birthday - My Niece by M. Asim Nehal

  • (6/12/2016 6:16:00 AM)


    Lovely birthday wishes for your niece. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/29/2015 1:55:00 AM)


    Please convey my wishes for her Birthday, Nice poem, Man (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/27/2015 5:01:00 PM)


    Very very beautiful expression this poem is to transfer birthday wishes. Life shows path definitely of realization. Interesting sharing.10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/27/2015 2:56:00 PM)


    A beautiful poem for a young loved one (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (11/27/2015 8:46:00 AM)


    Relationships are so beautiful and you have captured that through this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/27/2015 8:23:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem Asim.. May she be successful and happy in life :)

    My best wishes are for her :)
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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 27, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, November 27, 2015


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