David Harris

Gold Star - 4,611 Points (18 June 1945 / Bradfield, England)

On The Wind Of Mistrust - Poem by David Harris

I look out my window
and see the rain,
falling like teardropp
against my windowpane.
Our love has gone
now withered to dust,
scattered and blown away
on the wind of mistrust.

4 April 2008

Comments about On The Wind Of Mistrust by David Harris

  • (4/7/2008 10:18:00 AM)

    No more words needed in this fine write.....: O) (Report) Reply

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  • (4/6/2008 8:50:00 AM)

    In a nutshell D... succinct and poignant. t x (Report) Reply

  • (4/6/2008 7:00:00 AM)

    If there is no trust, love just turns to dust.. Never has truer words been spoken... Andy 10 (Report) Reply

  • Ernestine Northover (4/6/2008 5:55:00 AM)

    Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! That is so sweet and poingnant. A delight to find.
    I hope you still really trust him Vera!
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 6, 2008

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