One Among The Many Poem by David Harris

One Among The Many

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One among the many,
whose feeling lonely today.
Whose love has gone astray.

One among the many,
whose suffering from a broken heart.
Whose love has floundered on an empty shore

One among the many,
whose looking for a new start.
Hoping for a brighter future somewhere.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Oh sweetheart, how brilliantly written. Succinct, thoughtful and oh-so-very-you (and of course it isn't) . t x

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Ernestine Northover 14 June 2007

Let us hope they all get companionship, relief fcrom suffering, and find a new beginning too. Nice thoughtful write. Flows well too. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Marci Made 14 June 2007

there are spells at times, really lonely ones where it's hard to smile at all and those are times that we must remember to 'love ourselves', as hard and as impossible task that may seem to be.~~~~~~~~hugs, marci.xo [ps..easy for me to say, 'eh? but not ever easy to remember when the time need be, ]

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 June 2007

Ah one of the few... my love where are you...10

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Michael Shepherd 14 June 2007

David - from a sometimes fellow sufferer - the saints would say, that hope, in the present, is brighter far than any future... and of course, comes arm-in-arm with faith and loving care...

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David Harris

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