One Beautiful Night Poem by Hira Akhtar

One Beautiful Night

Rating: 4.8


Night travelling to reach the day
Riding in the chariot
Moon playing hide and seek
Peeping through clouds
Stars making mischieves in the moonlight
The giggling wind awakening the trees
Colourful buds anxious to bloom
He and I, together sitting ashore
Free of worries,
Free of gloom
Everything becoming quiet and silent
I can hear his heartbeat and he can mine
As we are waking and the whole world is asleep
Sea waves dancing and clamouring delightfully
His shining eyes staring at me with a glee
My shying face beside hands fascinates him
Makes him happy
Makes him uncomfortable
Putting his head on my lap
He talks to me, I talk to him
Stroking his head without any fear
We talk for hour hours, as the time has stopped
He loves my smiling face
And promises to give happiness always
Losing myself into his eyes
Seeing the ocean of love striking against the shore
I have drowned in it with my wish and desire
Seems as if the nature enjoys
Giving a chance to fly like a bird above the heights
Praying God never to rise the Sun
Let the doomsday come
For it is not less than that
He comes nearer as the fragrance to flower
Taking my face into his hands
Going me to kiss on the forehead
The warmth of his love is warmer than the fire
I am burning in it from head to toe
My eyes are closed and the heart beat stops
The sea having anxiety and the sky waiting eagerly
The stars whisper and the moon smiles
But the Sun up there misses the sight
His soft lips touch me and I feel a thrill
With this a tear of happiness at once drops
Suddenly my eyes open and what i see? ?
It was my dream
It was my dream..............

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I have choosen diffrent topics so i thought to write on this topic also.Its imaginary....Thanks
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ayesha Tul Kubra 05 August 2014

Its an amazing, mesmerizing poem. Hats off to you. Keep writing :)

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Hira Akhtar 27 December 2013

Thank you sir for your encouraging comment...

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Usman Arshad 25 December 2013

I prayed for you may allah Increase your knowledge and give you courage to face all hardships and always kept smile on your face

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Usman Arshad 25 December 2013

Your poetry is brilliant and smiling lines apply on yourself

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Patricia Grantham 11 October 2013

A very lovely and passionate write. I really like your style of words. Too bad it was a dream and not the real thing. regards

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Bhagabat prasad hotta 24 June 2019

Beautiful poem. So nice poem. Thanks for sharing your poetic thoughts 100++++++++7+++

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Konab Ghumman 10 March 2019

what a beautiful poem. It was my dream.. lovly expressions

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 March 2019

Colourful buds anxious to bloom He and I, together sitting ashore Free of worries, Free of gloom Everything becoming quiet and silent........the warmth of love expressed in such a powerful manner. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 25 January 2019

wonderful dear friend! lovely content and wonderful imagery it was my dream........ it was my dream...........- very clever.!

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 May 2017

The warmth of his love is warmer than the fire I am burning in it from head to toe My eyes are closed and the heart beat stops... What a beautiful dream very nice poem. imaginative.. thank you dear poetess

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