Our Friendship Poem by Hira Akhtar
Our Friendship
Our friendship is like a durable tree
tall and broad, that never pines
fluttering with it my sorrows flee
with water of love always shines
Like a selfless river, we're meandering
to fall in ocean of happiness endeavouring
from time to time its excitement is at zenith
crossing each curve with true spirit
Friendship garland is so flamboyant
having this, a priceless ornament
a harmonious melody crammed with sentiment
sometimes as soothing as an ointment
Our friendship, not a flower, that wrinkles
but a star in sky, that always twinkles
It's a bird whisteling love tunes
that appears each blind night
Good, you have edited and made it a durable. I have also edited and corrected many lines when guided by Bri Edwards. Any way it' sa nice poem.
True friendship lasts forever.Nice poem.Loved it.Keep inking Hira.
Friendship is a tree if its leaves is vast and green it gives shadows to more people as compared to those trees which have weak and baseless stem. So always become big tree to give shadow to others
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/16/2024 3:34:02 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A well articulated poem nicely written in poetic diction with lovely rhyme scheme. A friend in need is a friend indeed. A good friend is almost the equal of a good and happy family. I like the articulation of the poem as it captured the essence of true friendship. Anyone who has found a true friend is blessed with a rare gem. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Kudos Hira! Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.