My Doll Poem by Hira Akhtar

My Doll

Rating: 3.5

I have a charming little doll
its name is Rose to call

She has curly brown hair
her skin is so fair

She wears on her head, a cap
looks beautiful when i put her in my lap

Always for her dresses, I care
everything with her, I share

Her hair is very long
he can also sing a song

I feel proud when
Beauty of my doll
friends admire
To have the one like mine
they also desire

She has beautiful big eyes
bsolutely she never cries

I love my doll
an't leave it at all

Sunday, May 5, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: art
Actually my little sis's teacher gave her home task to draw a doll and write something about it.She came to me for help and then i wrote it. :)
Shahzia Batool 21 May 2013

this school life creative writing works wonders in later years! ! !

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Yasmin Khan 18 May 2013

Sweet, dolls are girls' dear 'friends' remember me my own childhood.

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Gajanan Mishra 05 May 2013

i love my doll. thanks, I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Bright Morn 12 May 2013

So sweet a peice u wrote for ur little sis, really enjoyed the read,

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Wahab Abdul 22 May 2013

sweet writing.. clear and clean.. love it..carry one

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Akhtar Jawad 11 April 2014

The man with the name of Jesus Christ is insulting this great name. It's a beautiful poem.

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Jesus Christ 07 April 2014

Yes it does matter because I'm Jesus Fool!

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Hira Akhtar 02 April 2014

it doesn't matter if you don't like..thanks for reading by the way :)

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Jesus Christ 02 April 2014

I don't like it at all. It the worst

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Heather Wilkins 16 September 2013

a beautiful poem about your doll good imagery keep on writing

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