One Evening When The Sun Was Low... Poem by prashant shaurya
One Evening When The Sun Was Low...
One evening when the sun was low
I strolled down the road below
and deep in thoughts that had a flow
tried to recover the golden glow....
As the darkness began to grow
and to its nest got back the crow
I knew I had something to draw
by moving the brush to and fro...
And then I saw an old fellow
shivering with his head bent low
and with all might the wind did blow
making his heart beat even slow....
And to protect him, I did so
gave him my shawl and made him glow
then said, be brave and fight the woe
to put up a brilliant show
what a beautiful poem shared here..nice setting and well done! ! !
It's a poem full of passion and warmth, very well rhymed. You are a kind-hearted person, prashant. Best wishes. Naseer
'As the darkness began to grow and to its nest got back the crow I knew I had something to draw by moving the brush to and fro...' Beautiful write with full of passion and warmth Well done Enjoyed reading it
member: Mary Spain a real achievement to find so many appropriate words ending with 'ow' well done mary
Eloquently expressed with a rich rhyming scheme and a fantastic flow. Well done my friend.
I liked the way it rhymed..well blended... and ofcourse the generosity and the message of kindness is good too.. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 12:33:35 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I think it took ur special mind and special time to rhyme this peom. Well done, i like it @ 10