One's Fairy Tale Through At The Night Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

One's Fairy Tale Through At The Night

Rating: 4.5


The rain doesn't frighten more our garden.................
Here we have met once, first time at last.................
And a ravens has departed from a branch pink.........
Only the small nightingale sings is sweet today here...
So the moon will think up a new fairy-tale for this day
As one more history of one thousand one night.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 16 May 2009

This is so lovely Tsira...your words bring these images to life....Fi 10++++

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Fay Slimm 16 May 2009

'The moon will think up a new fairy tale' - that is a lovely image Tsira..... super write.....10 + +++ Fay.xx

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Sue Sie 16 May 2009

The rain did not wash away these wonderful images you portray..10++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 May 2009

'Only the small nightingale sings is sweet today here... So the moon will think up a new fairy-tale for this day As one more history of one thousand one night.......' I always get very interesting imagery in your poem.10++

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Sathyanarayana M V S 18 May 2009

ARABIAN NIGHTS? .............very beautiful. I wrote rather a long poem.........RENDEZVOUS.......

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Costa Anakiev 29 May 2009

Dear Tsira, again your dreams led you in the thick forest of grammar mistakes. Konstantin.

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Sandra Fowler 28 May 2009

May the moon never fail to paint a fairytale in your enchanted garden, Lovely work, Tsira.10/10. Love, SandraX

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 25 May 2009

lucky nightingale :) lovely poem, thanks for sharing 10

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William Roberts 18 May 2009

This is very pretty. Though if the moon is really Scheherazade we have to worry about what would happen if she didn't think up a fairy tale every night. We'd be looking at a lot of moonless nights.

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Muhammad Ali 18 May 2009

very lovely piece, so touchy and soft! ! 10.. Ali

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