Lord, I don't know
what to say...
what to do...
or what to pray.
Still, Lord I am
on my knees...
hands clasped...
eyes shut...
Praying anyway.
written March 26 2008
Hi Shelley, i liked your poem for what little i saw of it, it does after all leave the reviewer perhaps wondering what this poem is about, what i mean is what were you feeling or going through when you wrote this poem? Don't get me wrong some poets just write a poem without any effort or thought, i guess i like to divulge and inquire more on the poem its self because a poem written with emotion or intent is always more powerful.I liked your choice of words and thought that your arrangement was good as well, keep up the good work.
shelly..........you're distinctive when it comes to believing and hoping........i'll pray for your prosperity...........and longevity...............
Hi Shelley, Short and profound.A prayer in a thousand more years! ! Thanks for your poetry.It really touched my heart. Thank you too for reading mine. Take care, Jona
Lord yet knows what to bestow upon by the prayer, beautiful poem when lucid, a rarest among the rare, i love it,10/10, thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What can we say…thank you!