Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,669 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***onto Eternity***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

in every night star stands and stares
dulcet dawn to come waking by warmth
tea cup in hand spewing scented fumes
eying all through the raves by news

yesterday is something different today
morning is never same by the evening
yet in between there lies history unknown
night never knows very freshness of sun rising

pyramid stands by its elusive strangeness
lest owes of tears slogs onto eternity
whom should we bespeaks of rune of mystery?
time when slowly slithers to edge of kisses

do their love smolder wilting ethereal?
as of lost planets shuffling in black-holes
universe fails to measure their quantum forces
rigidity of all dimensions when loses its strength

beauty yet never dies by a blooming flower
heart remembers fragrant petals of soigne rose
cloud never hides grace of love by attrition
yet love may be illusive by sultry vision.

Comments about ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***onto Eternity***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! by Dr subhendu kar

  • (2/13/2010 6:44:00 AM)

    Beauty, yet never dies by blooming flowers...Truely poetic! Nice reading.. (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (1/10/2010 6:31:00 AM)

    From : Harold K Schreiberg (London/ Orleans United Kingdom; Male; 47)
    To : Dr.subhendu Kar
    Date Time : 1/10/2010 4: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject : Re: hello,

    Good morning, dear poet friend,

    Thank you for your kind wishes
    I am sorry I haven't been able to answer more quickly but the PoemHunter site would not open!
    Your poems are full of striking images & rhythm, an excellent job
    (Report) Reply

  • Harold K Schreiberg (1/10/2010 4:14:00 AM)

    An excellent piece of poetry, full of striking images & contrasts... (Report) Reply

  • (1/8/2010 3:52:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem...eternity is always tomorrow spoken by the past
    ++10 regards
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  • (1/4/2010 4:56:00 PM)

    Nice poem doc...my girlfriend calls me Dr. John. The Dr. of love. (Report) Reply

  • (1/4/2010 4:24:00 PM)

    This is wonderful, I loved the powerful imagery and the way your words flow together. I also read some of your other works and enjoyed reading each and everyone of them. Keep on writing there is always room for improvement. (Report) Reply

  • (1/3/2010 9:52:00 PM)

    Its good! I like it =) (Report) Reply

  • (12/31/2009 2:46:00 PM)

    This goes beyond deepness yet the intellectual minds see the depth (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2009 4:09:00 PM)

    a wonderful poem, nice imagery, ......liked it.....
    and thanks for your new year wishes, a very happy new year 2010 to you too! !
    (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (12/28/2009 3:54:00 PM)

    From : Sivashanmugam Shanmugam (karur India; Male; 53)
    To : Dr.subhendu Kar
    Date Time : 12/28/2009 11: 48: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject : HI

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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (12/28/2009 3:26:00 PM)

    From : Tess Fielders (Sth E Queensland Australia; Female; 56)
    To : Dr.subhendu Kar
    Date Time : 12/27/2009 9: 26: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject : Re: hello,

    Dear Dr Subhendu Kar

    Thank you for your kind wishes for the new year. I have read your poem and it is most thought provoking and deep. Thank you for sharing.
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/27/2009 6:43:00 PM)

    From the simplicity of a single petal to the awe and grandeur of the pyramid, your poem walks with giant steps. Your passion for language is outstanding, Subhendu and you spread words with generosity and fulsome abandon onto the canvass of your vision. Love is only hidden from the receiver, but when the giver wears a mask. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Linda Ori (12/27/2009 3:45:00 PM)

    And time marches on into eternity! How long have the pyramids stood strong against time and the elements, and they will continue to stand. Beautiful imagery throughout, Subhendu, and a thought-provoking read. Very nice! (Report) Reply

  • (12/27/2009 9:22:00 AM)

    Subhendu will we ever understand the depths and width of eternity... well penned my friend very deep and meaningful regards Alf (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2009 3:04:00 PM)

    that was real lovely... i liked it. =) (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2009 8:39:00 AM)

    This has wonderful scenery, and it sure has eternity in it. Keep on having passion for words in your pen. (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2009 5:12:00 AM)

    wonderful poem....nice to read all thru..........10 (Report) Reply

  • Louis Rams (12/25/2009 8:30:00 PM)

    the last verse tells it all. (Report) Reply

  • (12/25/2009 8:23:00 PM)

    Thank you, I enjoy reading your works. This piece reminded me of the book: Love in the time of Cholera. In the book the main character was dying and as he way lying on his death bed, he said something profound and it stayed with me. I often think about it. Anyway, he said, ' The only regret i have of dying is that i am not dying for love.' Thanks for sharing.10++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • (12/25/2009 8:15:00 PM)

    Love it really excellent, i don't think i'll ever be able to write this good! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 22, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 26, 2009

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