Opportunity Poem by Johannes Yeboah

Opportunity

Rating: 5.0


Like a flash of lightening
Brandishing the sky
His richness in splendour-enchanting
More than money could buy!

Reach out to Him! He's within your grasp
Can't you feel His presence?
Languish not for time to elapse
Before you embrace His imminence!

I come and go
I come but once
Seize me! Oh seize my soul
Before my foe puts you in a trance!

I come like one in guise
That's what I am: a flash in a pan!
My craters of regret are deep in demise
Caress me! Oh my beloved!
Feast on me as much as you can!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christina Smith 14 April 2009

Quite a strong poem, with advanced vocaburaly! ! Well Done, I felt a lot of drama and power, reading that! 10! !

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Ency Bearis 14 April 2009

a substantial poem..well written and the intense of the verses are eye catching..10

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 14 April 2009

u have deepened your the theme of this poem thru ur words and imagination.. amazing poem

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Greenwolfe 1962 19 April 2009

This had better be a religious piece. If it isn't I'm in trouble. Unlike the first poem, the title here does not help at all. It is much to vague for the contents. This might well be an example of a bad title. But be that as it may. It was a very nicely written piece. If this was a religious writing, it was well done, if not, then it wasn't. GW62

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 15 April 2009

a finely written piece.. well done

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Honest Heart 14 April 2009

WOW! ! ! ............Your poem is great............I loved it a loooooooooot...SUPER...10++

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Luwi Habte 14 April 2009

well done johannes i like it

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Sandra Martyres 14 April 2009

An interesting poem with a lot of depth...Good write Johannes

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