Ordinary Poem by Bharati Nayak

Ordinary

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I am a piece of pebble
Very ordinary
Lying on the road side
You passerby
Perhaps
Took a fancy
Picked me up
Perhaps
You found
Some color and beauty
And so
Took me
With you
Beauty lies
In your eyes
I am just a pebble
Very ordinary
Oh passerby! !

Thursday, October 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: virtue,beauty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madathil Rajendran Nair 06 November 2016

I am the passer-by of your poem. I do collect pebbles and rather see divinity in them. Beautiful poem. (10)

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Bharati Nayak 07 November 2016

Thank you.Thank you so much.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2016

Some colour and beauty! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 07 November 2016

Thank you Edward Kofi Louis.We are all co-travellers.It is wonderful experience to appreciate each others'works.

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Bri Edwards 13 December 2018

NOW this will be included in January 2019's Showcase. Thanks! ! bri (:

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Bri Edwards 22 November 2018

1 – From the start to the finish, you must have grown! You went from a piece of pebble to a (whole) pebble! “peb•ble noun: pebble; plural noun: pebbles 1. a small stone made smooth and round by the action of water or sand. adjective informal 1. (of an eyeglass lens) very thick and convex. pebble glassespeb•ble (CONT.)

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Bharati Nayak 22 November 2018

Thank you Bri for your nice comment.I missed your December Showcase.Your comments compesate the loss. I like the idea - -I have grown from a piece of pebble to to a whole pebble.

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Bri Edwards 22 November 2018

(CONT.) One's concept of beauty can vary greatly from another's concept of beauty. if YOU were a pebble, or even a PIECE of pebble, i WOULD be tempted to take you home with me. i could always discard you back to the road side/road's side/roadside! ! ! ! i've already discarded OR been discarded by several wives. :) to MyPoemList. bri (:

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Bri Edwards 22 November 2018

1 – From the start to the finish, you must have grown! You went from a piece of pebble to a (whole) pebble! “peb•ble noun: pebble; plural noun: pebbles 1. a small stone made smooth and round by the action of water or sand. adjective informal 1. (of an eyeglass lens) very thick and convex. pebble glasses (CONT.)

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bri edwards 22 November 2018

you must have grown during the poem's writing! ! ! you went from a piece of pebble to a (complete) pebble. ha ha. peb·ble noun 1. a small stone made smooth and round by the action of water or sand. adjective informal 1. (of an eyeglass lens) very thick and convex. pebble glasses (CONT.)

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