On Your Brows Poem by Bharati Nayak
On Your Brows
On your brows
Wear a piece of my breath
Of my life
Take the days, months and years
Take the seconds, minutes and hours
And decorate your house
Oh dear, I will love to eternity.
Hi Bharati, Very powerful and emotionally charged poem on Love. On your brows Wear a piece of my breath Of my life And counting the seconds of love- pyaar ke lamhein - very novel idea. Beautifully penned. A perfect 10+++ Take the days, months and years Take the seconds, minutes and hours And decorate your house Oh dear, I will love to eternity.
Thank you Sri Unnikrishnan E.S. for your wonderful comment.It is great feeling when poet and critic like you come to read my poem.
Simplicity of expression combined with depth of feeling makes a good poem. This is a very good poem and it demonstrates your fine lyricism.
I returned to this poem- -read it again- -and fell in love with it all over again! That is the hallmark of a great poem- -it never gets old- -it stays vibrant and essential. This is a poem that deserves honors and awards and a place in history. 10 million points and a place on my fav list and it deserves a place in a published book that would sit on my bookcase except when I was reading it again and yet again
wearin the breath...... what a wonderful poetic thinking and expression...... thank u dear Bharati... tony
a dedication for you with my breath......what a powerful message......displayed in your touchy lines...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/21/2024 10:21:32 PM # 1.0.0.1119
WOW! What a complete confession of love in just a few chosen words and promises that will not only convince your beloved but also give you a model of behavior to follow in the future so YOU do not fail in keeping this passion alive. This is the sincerity which makes love believable and real to those who have the truest intentions. And the same depth of affection.
It is so nice to hear 'WOW' for the poem.Every poet desires to know the views of readers on his /herwork.Your comments always lift the spirit of writers.Thank you so much for your valuable feedback.