Our Children Are The Funeral Pyre Poem by Susan Williams

Our Children Are The Funeral Pyre

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our children are the leftovers of our violence
our children are the sacrifice of our greed
our children need a guardrail to keep them safe
on our journey through the importance of our days
our children need deliverance out of the house of our self-bondage
and the hypocrisy of our path
our children are the scraps of their upbringing
our children are the funeral pyre of our ego
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~~~~~~~~~~~©2019 Susan Williams

Tuesday, January 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: children,social comment,society
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 23 January 2019

Absorbing and reflective, for as long as I have been around, great people have always enunciated the importance of children and the future, but what good are children if the future we make with our present steps are head to disaster. There is also a subset of people, small, who see children as accessories of their lives, something to claim trophy to, that's when we are their pallbearers.

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Susan Williams 27 January 2019

tHIS SITE IS SKIPPING SO BADLY that I cannot write replies on site and typ

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Susan Williams 27 January 2019

tHIS SITE IS SKIPPING SO BADLY that I cannot write replies on site and type it into reply boxes so far I have spent 12 minutes trying to get this posted

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Susan Williams 27 January 2019

I thank you for going deep inside the topic of this poem because why else do we write except to exchange ideas and try to awaken consciences? Thank you so very much for being awakened already and already involved in this change

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Susan Williams 27 January 2019

TRYING AGAIN- -I thank you for going deep inside the topic of this poem because why else do we write except to exchange ideas and try to awaken consciences? Thank you so very much for being awakened already and already involved in this change

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Anjandev Roy 13 November 2020

This is simply brilliant.........thank u.......anjandev roy.

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Susan Williams 16 September 2020

You are welcome! I imagine some are glad I write less! ! ! ! I know some of my poems are throw-aways- - some are to provoke laughter in those who read and that is a good thing to do with some poetry- -but I do desire to write worthy of contemplation poetry. Thank you for wishing me well, Soran

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Susan Williams 16 September 2020

Exactly, Soran. It is hard enough to be wise in our handling of our children and produce a well-balanced, caring, and honest. It is almost impossible if we parents do not prioritize our children in all things. Yes, Soran, we the country will reap what we as the country sowed in our ads, in our songs, in our movies, in our games, in our speech, in our attitudes and behaviors considering drink, drugs, , work, purpose. Oh, I could go on and on

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Susan Williams 16 September 2020

Thank you for highlighting this line- I felt it carried the rage I feel when parents don't parent their children but abuse them or lose them to the evil people in this world. Thank you, Soran, for the 10 and for faving this. I really appreciate the attention given to this one!

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Soran M. H 14 September 2020

Dear boss Susan, we are interested and enjoy reading your poetry creations. Well done, wish you all the best and every success This is the perfect way to respect poetry, to write little but with a high quality, well done and thanks for sharing

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